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## Left out for brevity
+---
+
+#### Try whatever comes?
+
+
+
+
+
+
+
+
Restart
+
+On average this takes several lifetimes.
+
---
diff --git a/slides/intro.md b/slides/intro.md
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@@ -34,11 +34,11 @@
-V-
-Modern world brought us...
+Modern world brought to us:
-- safety, stability, long life
-- freedom, opportunities
-- accessible information, knowledge
+- safety, stability, long life
+- freedom, opportunities
+- accessible information, knowledge
...and **so many options** to choose from!
@@ -50,11 +50,10 @@ Modern world brought us...
We can easily become overwhelmed by options.
-- What if I pick the wrong option?
-- Should I go back and try the other one?
-- Will this be the best use of my resources?
-- Shouldn't I spend more time researching this?
-- What is the best choice?
+- what to choose?
+- go back, try something else?
+- best use of resources?
+- more research needed?
-V-
@@ -67,17 +66,17 @@ We can easily become overwhelmed by options.
#### But as the saying goes...
-> The best is the mortal enemy of the good
+> Premature optimization is the root of all evil
-— Montesquieu
+— Donald Knuth
-V-
#### But as the saying goes...
-> Premature optimization is the root of all evil
+> The best is the mortal enemy of the good
-— Donald Knuth
+— Montesquieu
---
@@ -118,41 +117,6 @@ We can easily become overwhelmed by options.
This could take a lifetime.
--V-
-
-#### Try whatever comes?
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
Restart
-
-On average this takes several lifetimes.
-
-V-
#### Focus in one direction?
@@ -255,6 +219,8 @@ by Petr Ludwig
+Basis for this talk.
+
-V-
@@ -264,6 +230,8 @@ by Angela Duckworth
+> Perseverance beats talent.
+
-V-
@@ -273,6 +241,8 @@ by Martin Seligman
+> Positivity and contentment can be learned.
+
-V-
@@ -281,3 +251,5 @@ by Martin Seligman
by Leo Babauta
+
+> It's worth making room for deep work.
diff --git a/slides/motivation.md b/slides/motivation.md
index e159047..4438dba 100644
--- a/slides/motivation.md
+++ b/slides/motivation.md
@@ -43,11 +43,12 @@ Two phases:
-V-
-**Pros:**
-- it works!
+#### Pros:
+It works!
+
-**Cons:**
-- it causes us damage, it is not sustainable
+#### Cons:
+It causes us damage, it is not sustainable
Joy fades, requiring more demanding goals.
@@ -60,6 +61,16 @@ Joy fades, requiring more demanding goals.
The reward for finishing a major goal is not worth a long struggle to get there.
+-V-
+
+### My past goals
+
+> I'll build a cool website for generating artwork and sell the art and the code!
+
+- I built the website!
+ - I enjoyed this part.
+- I never went through with any selling.
+ - I didn't like this part.
---
### Journey-based motivation
@@ -76,23 +87,37 @@ Joy is found in doing an activity, not finishing it.
### Flow
-State of deep immersion in an activity that...
+State of deep immersion in an activity that...
* is challenging
* makes use of our strengths
* matches our skills
* is enjoyable.
-We tend to lose our sense of time.
+We tend to lose our sense of time,
-And it feels good.
+and it feels good.
+
+-V-
+
+### You know the feeling
+
+of staying up late
+
+trying to recompile the code just one last time
+
+with the help of this random person's forum post
+
+hoping the app will finally start working.
+
+**Right?**
---
### Personal vision
-How we'd like to spend our limited time.
+How we'd like to spend our limited time.
- activities we'd like to be doing
- milestones we'd like to pass
@@ -102,20 +127,18 @@ How we'd like to spend our limited time.
### Meaning
-When your actions have positive impact on others,
-it gives them a deeper meaning.
-- supporting the greater good feels rewarding
- - helping others,
- - being part of something bigger,
- - creating a legacy
-- it creates a strong and lasting motivation
+We like working on **meaningful** things:
+- supporting the greater good,
+- helping others,
+- being part of something bigger,
+- creating a lasting legacy.
-V-
### Group vision
-Cooperation of individual visions.
+Cooperation of individual visions.
- working together helps the group
- it also boosts one's own potential
@@ -123,6 +146,21 @@ Cooperation of individual visions.
> The whole is greater than the sum of its parts.
+-V-
+
+### Meaning for me
+
+Fan of free and open source software:
+- I use it daily:
+ - OS & apps
+ - fixes & features
+ - documentation, tips, help
+- I contribute back:
+ - releasing code, fixes
+ - sponsoring useful projects and individuals
+
+**Everyone benefits.**
+
---
### TOOL: Personal Vision
diff --git a/slides/overview.md b/slides/overview.md
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--- a/slides/overview.md
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@@ -18,38 +18,10 @@ How to stop procrastinating...
---
-## 4 sections
+## Overview
--V-
-### 1. Motivation
-
-Finding a **personal vision**
-
-that you want to work towards.
-
--V-
-
-### 2. Discipline
-
-Building **good habits**
-
-to take specific actions
-
-towards the vision.
-
--V-
-
-### 3. Outcomes
-
-Maintaining a **positive attitude**
-
-to keep on going.
-
--V-
-
-### 4. Objectivity
-
-Gathering **external feedback**
-
-to continue your personal growth.
+- **Motivation**: Finding a personal vision.
+- **Discipline**: Building good habits.
+- **Outcomes**: Maintaining a positive attitude.
+- **Objectivity**: Gathering external feedback.