diff --git a/slides/disabled.md b/slides/disabled.md
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--- a/slides/disabled.md
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@@ -1,6 +1,15 @@
## Left out for brevity
--V-
+---
+
+
+*Leaders Eat Last*
+
+by Simon Sinek
+
+
+
+---
#### Arousal addiction
@@ -9,3 +18,52 @@
Addiction to new, stronger stimuli.
e.g. by setting bigger and bigger goals.
+
+---
+
+## Discipline
+
+---
+
+### TOOL: Daily Heroism
+[Philip Zimbardo]
+
+-V-
+
+Take a small step out of your comfort zone.
+
+Daily.
+
+-V-
+
+#### Why?
+- grows your ability to **act**, step out of the crowd
+- supports fulfilling your vision and maintaining discipline
+
+It makes the elephant jump before it realizes
the hole is too deep for comfort.
+
+
+-V-
+
+### My Heroism
+
+Game of smalltalk
+
+- chat up random people
+- do it before you rationalize a reason to back out
+
+---
+
+### Real world
+
+is complex and ever-changing.
+
+### Mental model
+
+is our understanding of the world and its rules.
+
+-V-
+
+Mental models have varying levels of *objectivity*,
+
+i.e. how much they correspond to reality.
diff --git a/slides/discipline.md b/slides/discipline.md
index 277104c..8ecb2e3 100644
--- a/slides/discipline.md
+++ b/slides/discipline.md
@@ -139,30 +139,37 @@ and track them daily.
-V-
-### My Tracking
+### My Tracking Example
-- Gym sessions tracker
- - A4 sheet per week
- - table of exercises for tracking effort
-- Work session log
- - digital journal
- - one line per day of what I worked on
- - brief and simple, use of keywords
-
-Once a habit is firmly established, I drop the tracking.
+#### Gym sessions
+- A4 sheet per week, daily tracking
+- table of exercises + time and effort
-V-
-#### Gym sessions tracker
+
+#### Book of workouts
-V-
+
#### One page per week
-V-
+
#### 100 weeks in a row
(1.92 years)
+-V-
+
+### My Observations
+
+- helped me to build a habit
+- kept me accountable
+- lowering barriers for entry is key
+ - predefined plan = less decision making
+ - always have a few sheets in stock
+
---
### TOOL: ToDo Today
@@ -252,32 +259,3 @@ At the end of the day:
1. TODAY entries move to an archive
2. TOMORROW is formed, becomes TODAY
3. Job well done!
-
----
-
-### TOOL: Daily Heroism
-[Philip Zimbardo]
-
--V-
-
-Take a small step out of your comfort zone.
-
-Daily.
-
--V-
-
-#### Why?
-- grows your ability to **act**, step out of the crowd
-- supports fulfilling your vision and maintaining discipline
-
-It makes the elephant jump before it realizes
the hole is too deep for comfort.
-
-
--V-
-
-### My Heroism
-
-Game of smalltalk
-
-- chat up random people
-- do it before you rationalize a reason to back out
diff --git a/slides/intro.md b/slides/intro.md
index cf163f7..a38f471 100644
--- a/slides/intro.md
+++ b/slides/intro.md
@@ -34,12 +34,10 @@
-V-
-### Expanding potential
+Modern world brought us...
-Never before in history did we have so much...
-
-- safety, stability, life expectancy
-- freedom, opportunity
+- safety, stability, long life
+- freedom, opportunities
- accessible information, knowledge
...and **so many options** to choose from!
@@ -283,12 +281,3 @@ by Martin Seligman
by Leo Babauta
-
--V-
-
-
-*Leaders Eat Last*
-
-by Simon Sinek
-
-
diff --git a/slides/motivation.md b/slides/motivation.md
index 28c43ca..e159047 100644
--- a/slides/motivation.md
+++ b/slides/motivation.md
@@ -43,9 +43,11 @@ Two phases:
-V-
-**Pros:** it works!
+**Pros:**
+- it works!
-**Cons:** it causes us damage,
it is not sustainable
+**Cons:**
+- it causes us damage,
it is not sustainable
Joy fades, requiring more demanding goals.
@@ -87,6 +89,17 @@ And it feels good.
---
+### Personal vision
+
+
+How we'd like to spend our limited time.
+
+- activities we'd like to be doing
+- milestones we'd like to pass
+- journey-based internal motivation
+
+---
+
### Meaning
When your actions have positive impact on others,
@@ -100,23 +113,12 @@ it gives them a deeper meaning.
-V-
-### Personal vision
-
-
-How we'd like to spend our limited time.
-
-- activities we'd like to be doing
-- milestones we'd like to pass
-- journey-based internal motivation
-
--V-
-
### Group vision
Cooperation of individual visions.
-- it boosts the entire group
-- as well as one's own potential
+- working together helps the group
+- it also boosts one's own potential
> The whole is greater than the sum of its parts.
@@ -147,16 +149,12 @@ What gets out of bed in the morning?
### Personal SWOT
-
S
Strengths
-
W
Weaknesses
-
O
Opportunities
-
T
Threats
+
S
Strengths
+
W
Weaknesses
+
O
Opportunities
+
T
Threats
--V-
-
-Time to reflect on yourself!
-
-V-
#### Strengths
@@ -201,47 +199,49 @@ These can be improved, but don't devote too much time to it.
#### Strengths
-- life-long programming experience, love building useful solutions
-- attention to detail, carefulness, looking for perfection; love creating nice and clean software
-- persevering problem solver; like to explore and solve mysteries in tech
+- life-long programming experience
+- perfectionist who loves creating nice and clean software
+- persevering problem solver, especially with mysteries in tech
- open-minded and attentive listener
-V-
#### Weaknesses
- introverted, social interactions are taxing
-- lacking in open confrontation, group arguments
-- cautious in opinions, not an 'influencer'
+- cautious in opinions
+
+I spent way too much time fighting my social skills.
-V-
#### Opportunities
-- switch jobs for
- - better fitting role - SW developer?
+- switch jobs for...
+ - better fitting role (SW developer)
- higher pay
- different tech stack
+ - getting back to distributed systems
- contribute to an open source project
-- use college degree (distributed systems)
-- build specific expertise, get exposure
-- share knowledge through talks and blog
-- contribute to the state-of-the-art
+- build specific expertise on one topic
+- get more exposure, share knowledge through talks and blog
+- ...
-V-
#### Threats
-- changed role: boring / stressful / annoying
-- changed job:
- - low pay / annoying co-workers / toxic workplace / long commute
+- changed role or job
+ - boring / stressful / annoying
+ - annoying co-workers / toxic workplace
+ - lower pay / long commute
- having to use Windows
-- more exposure - personal attacks
+- more exposure leading to personal attacks
-V-
#### My Observations
-- my SWOT felt misaligned with the current career (people management)
+- my SWOT felt misaligned with the current career (coding vs. people management)
- Threats already applied to the current situation
-Change was desirable and not even that risky.
+Change was apparently needed + low risk.
---
@@ -255,11 +255,10 @@ Change was desirable and not even that risky.
### My Achievements
-- finished college with a cool master's thesis
-- became a dev team leader
-- self-hosting the services I use via VPS
+- finished college, wrote a cool master's thesis
+- became a team leader
+- self-hosting my services via VPS
- extracted ERP legacy tax functionality via a strategy pattern
-- built and coded a split keyboard
- learned to type using the Workman layout
- ...
@@ -324,15 +323,6 @@ Finding a personal vision takes effort and time.
--V-
-
-#### Answer these...
-
-1. Favorite quote/idea that resonates?
-2. Life values?
-3. Fulfilling activities?
-4. Meaningful activities?
-
-V-
### My Beta-Vision
@@ -346,18 +336,11 @@ Finding a beta version is easier
so you won't procrastinate to start!
--V-
-
-### My Final Vision
-
-WIP
-
---
+
### Act Now!
@@ -386,4 +369,4 @@ Starting small is fine, as long as you start!
- to avoid overthinking it
- to figure out if I need to scale it out
- I regularly experienced flow, improved my mood, raised my skills and really enjoyed doing it.
-- having a vision is one thing, but acting on it is also essential
+- having a vision for your life is nice, but acting on it is essential
diff --git a/slides/objectivity.md b/slides/objectivity.md
index cbab0da..b85762d 100644
--- a/slides/objectivity.md
+++ b/slides/objectivity.md
@@ -8,22 +8,6 @@ Aligning our assumptions with reality.
---
-### Real world
-
-is complex and ever-changing.
-
-### Mental model
-
-is our understanding of the world and its rules.
-
--V-
-
-Mental models have varying levels of *objectivity*,
-
-i.e. how much they correspond to reality.
-
----
-
### Dunning-Kruger effect
is a cognitive bias
@@ -59,7 +43,6 @@ overestimate their abilities.
- check your facts, use reliable sources
- question your intuition
- seek external feedback
-- search for both proof and disproof of facts
-V-
diff --git a/slides/outcomes.md b/slides/outcomes.md
index fdb0524..9779337 100644
--- a/slides/outcomes.md
+++ b/slides/outcomes.md
@@ -5,27 +5,13 @@
-V-
+Flow brings outcomes and they keep us going:
-Daily meaningful activities
-
-using skills you already have
-
-gets you into flow.
-
--V-
-
-
-Flow frequently brings **outcomes**:
-
-- emotional outcomes (makes us happy)
-- material outcomes (fruits of our labour)
+- emotional - it makes us happy
+- material - fruits of our labour
---
-Outcomes keep us going.
-
--V-
-
### But sometimes...
we get derailed by bad mood
@@ -42,17 +28,17 @@ Negativity captures our attention
more than positivity.
--V-
-
-#### So we stay down
-
-due to the negative feedback loop:
-
Negativity and pessimism reinforce themselves.
-V-
-We need **emotional stability** to keep us going.
+Negative feedback loop may keep us down,
+
+unproductive, in a bad mood.
+
+-V-
+
+We need **emotional stability** to keep on going.
---
@@ -110,6 +96,22 @@ Because it learned it is no use to even try.
---
+#### Positive Cycle of Flow
+
+1. Do meaningful actions
+2. Feel good
+3. Growing skills
+4. Believe in yourself
+5. GOTO 1
+
+-V-
+
+My morning routine of flow
+
+definitely helped!
+
+---
+
#### How to break out?
---
@@ -147,21 +149,6 @@ Because it learned it is no use to even try.
---
-#### Positive Cycle of Flow
-
-1. Do meaningful actions
-2. Feel good
-3. Growing skills
-4. Believe in yourself
-5. GOTO 1
--V-
-
-My morning routine of flow
-
-definitely helped!
-
----
-
#### How to orient yourself towards the future?
Personal Vision
@@ -172,16 +159,12 @@ Personal Vision
Choice of attitude
----
+-V-
We are free to choose our reaction to events.
[Viktor Frankl]
--V-
-
-We choose **how we interpret** our past.
-
---
diff --git a/slides/overview.md b/slides/overview.md
index e59a473..3497837 100644
--- a/slides/overview.md
+++ b/slides/overview.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-## In this episode...
+## What to expect today?
-V-
@@ -18,38 +18,38 @@ How to stop procrastinating...
---
-## TL;DR
+## 4 sections
-V-
-### Motivation
+### 1. Motivation
-Find a **personal vision**
+Finding a **personal vision**
that you want to work towards.
-V-
-### Discipline
+### 2. Discipline
-Build **good habits**
+Building **good habits**
to take specific actions
-towards your vision.
+towards the vision.
-V-
-### Outcomes
+### 3. Outcomes
-Gain **positive results**
+Maintaining a **positive attitude**
-and keep on going.
+to keep on going.
-V-
-### Objectivity
+### 4. Objectivity
-Gather **external feedback**
+Gathering **external feedback**
to continue your personal growth.